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thebratqueenNext Epiphany story is giving me backtalk. It's weird - I know what's going to happen and how it's going to sound, but it feels wrong as I'm writing it for all that when I go back and reread what I've done it's exactly what I want it to say.
Never had this happen before. Usually if a story's giving me a problem it's that it feels right when I'm writing it but makes me cringe on the re-read.
Bleh. May take a yoga and dinner break and try again later. May also just flat-out rewrite it. It's only 3 pages so far and really the only part of it that doesn't give me this weird feeling is the first two sentences.
Never had this happen before. Usually if a story's giving me a problem it's that it feels right when I'm writing it but makes me cringe on the re-read.
Bleh. May take a yoga and dinner break and try again later. May also just flat-out rewrite it. It's only 3 pages so far and really the only part of it that doesn't give me this weird feeling is the first two sentences.
